My role model is that i wont to be a queen.When i was younger people ask me wont you dream to be and i was telling them that i wont to be a queen. And i promes to my grandfather that one day i will be a queen.
To be honest with you, you have few mistakes and otherwise it's a very good paragraph. And i don't want shattered your dream but i don't think you could be a queen.
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To be honest with you, you have few mistakes and otherwise it's a very good paragraph. And i don't want shattered your dream but i don't think you could be a queen.
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